Gentle, frightened eyes
survey ’round the enclosed ring,
ignorant of fate.
Caped bully struts in;
unanticipated foe.
No sitting bull, he.
Unforeseen battle
is called down upon my head.
Toro moves in time.
Tied tongue or bullocks,
Madman has no time to doze;
takes care where he steps.
Cheers rain like bullion.
All take stock in victory.
Who will crash today?
Final moments come.
Bowing to El Matador –
Crowd demands a kill.
“Bull—oney,” I snort.
If but one leaves this duel,
my swords strike with might.
© 2013 jody love
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During the first part of the month of April, Carpe Diem’s prompts focus on The Zodiac. The April 1st prompt was simply on The Zodiac, in general. April 3rd’s prompt takes us beyond Aries to the next position in the Zodiac – Taurus, the bull (Zodiac 2). I hope you enjoy the various ways in which I’ve tried to depict the bull in our society, beyond his Dance with El Matador. How many references can you target (like a bullseye)?
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I’ve worked in a double challenge on this one, also adding in Trifecta’s April Fool’s Day prompt for the week:
rain (transitive verb)
1: to pour down
2: to give or administer abundantly <rained blows on his head>
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
- If your post doesn’t meet our requirements, please leave your link in the comments section, not in the linkz.
- Trifecta is open to everyone. Please join us.
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RELATED ARTICLES:
- Carpe Diem Haiku: Aries (Zodiac 1: the ram) (humantriumphant.wordpress.com)
- Carpe Diem Haiku: Haru Higan (spring equinox) (humantriumphant.wordpress.com)
- Carpe Diem Haiku: What month has a red herring in it? (humantriumphant.wordpress.com)
Brilliant. Loved it.
thanks Indira – good to see you!
This poem was chocked full of bull! 😉
I hope it caused you to become ebullient! 😀
😆
This Bull is thrilled with this awesome piece Jody: 😀
I’m thrilled to get the bull’s stamp(ede) of approval!
Ha!ha!
Buillions of cheers…
Cheers to you, Björn 🙂
I love the haiku structure. It gives the piece a unique feel!
thx Draug!
This is very original. It reads well, and the imagery is fantastic. Cheers rain…. well done.
Rank rou, Rog!
Okay you page is a wonderful rubix cube intertwined writing challenges, poetry and prose. Great work! My favorite line: no sitting bull he.
I deal with it just like a rubix cube too, Sam – pull off the stickers and rearrange them when things don’t come together to my liking 😉
Jody, you never fail to make me laugh. I love the haiku structure, and that’s no bull… you do indeed celebrate the effervescence of the human spirit. 🙂
glad you appreciate that, Steph. some people get irritated by its fizz getting on them! ha! have a terrific day!
Brilliant tale! I’m impressed by your creativity here Jody. 😉
Eliz
thanks Eliz. If only I could’ve worked in “bullrush,” my soul would’ve called it complete. 😉
Love the title! Kudos on writing it in haiku.
Not sure, but I think in the last one you mean duel?
dang MS-DOS (my spellcheck didn’t operate sufficiently)! Thank you, Kymm!!!!!! Yes, better to save dual-ing for Geminis, not Tauruses!
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“Bull-oney”! Haha! This is really clever and an original take on the prompt!
just please tell me you snorted when you laughed over it, Bee – that would make my day epic! 😉
I enjoyed this. At least it was not a cock and bull story! 😉 I thought I commented yesterday so delete one of them if I did.
Lumdog – I would never delete you, my friend! You come and crow as often as you wish!! -j
this was wonderful!! Bull-loney! best use of that word, ever.
Plus you used the RAIN the way I wanted to..this was such a pleasure to read.
Hi Kir! It looks like you’ve got a new project going with some other folks (based on when I access your link). Wishing you a blast with that!
Ha! Loved it.
whew! If you’re going to feed someone a lot of bull, it’s always a relief to know it was tasty! 😉
Jody how very clever – and that’s no bull-oney 🙂
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